The Sam Creature: Episode One (UNFINISHED)
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The Sam Creature: Episode One
(UNFINISHED)
You’re walking down a long and dark street, that seems to never end. There were no houses, only the creepiest trees you have ever seen. While you’re walking you hear a thud at the trees. You walked like a snail to the towering and brown leafed trees. Suddenly a creature pops out from behind the tree.
A creature with black melting eyes, light grey skin, two metered arms with a blade at the end that could cut diamonds, eight legs in a circle around his body with a million spikes at the bottom and a ripped shirt saying “S.A.M.” His feet had bones sticking out with dark black mould growing on them, there were tiny holes all over his body, a grin on his face with crusty pale lips.
The Dry Light Grey Creature horrified your eyes. The creature opened his enormous mouth with two tongues the size of boats and said
“My name is S.A.M.” The creature was named S.A.M.?
You backed away in fear. Then you slipped on a grey and miniature pebble and fell straight to the ground. As your head hit the rock-solid concrete, you felt the blood run down your head and spread across the cement. You immediately got up and ran like there’s no tomorrow.
You ran and screamed until your throat started to hurt. You ran so fast the sweat flew off your face. You whipped out your FUNKphone and called 000. When you called the police your FUNKphone melted in your palms, it stunned you. But then you also realized that your cut at the back of your head was gone.
Suddenly you heard a lip licking sound right in front of you. Then you looked up and saw S.A.M. in front of you, in the streetlamp light. S.A.M. opened his dry mouth wide open. The space between his mouth was massive. His boat-sized tongues shot out and wrapped around your body. The force on your body was like three polar bears on top of you.
S.A.M. pulled you to him with his tongues. The tongues get wetter, the longer you were stuck in them, almost like his mouth was watering for food! With his life-threatening blade arms, he cut the sides of your body. Then proceed to inject black goo into your lungs, with his blades.
He unwrapped you and you dropped to the floor with agonising pain. The pain on your sides were throbbing and the goo-like substance was eating your organs. You closed your eyes… and sprung with a gasp.
“I had the nightmare again!” You yelled out to your mum in the kitchen.
“Oh well, It’s not the end of the world! Also, go and have shower, Kimberly!” Your mum replied.
You rubbed your eyes and hoped out of bed. Your room was pitch black so you stumbled towards the light switch. You gave it a flick. The light stung your eyes for a moment.
Bedroom Layout: Medium rectangle room, a queen-sized bed in the upper left-hand corner with a thick light blue blanket (pom-poms on top), a stiff black timber drawer (3 draws) next to it, two average brown doors, one exits and the other goes to the bathroom (Bathroom one: lower in the middle. Exit one: upper right-hand corner) and blank white walls.
Your hand hooked the plastic sliver door knob. As you twisted it, you thought to yourself, “Will I ever be fixed?” You pushed the door open. Lifted your foot up and stepped into dull white shower.
You lightly twisted the hot shower nob. Each drop of water that landed on your head, woke you a little bit more. The water dripped your body and then leaped to the tiled floor.
You picked up the shampoo bottle effortless with your left hand. Then squirted the coconut and oil shampoo on to your right hand.
That’s it
Explanation for why I made this
@The3HeadedOrange, I hope you’ll one day have the inspiration and motivation to continue this story, as a labour of love, without commitments or guilt. You’ve got real talent. I really enjoyed reading this reworking, it’s on par with the initial version, even if the tone has shifted towards a darker theme, and you left behind some of the SAMTIME lore elements.
@Adriana The SAMTIME lore bits were removed BUT there was going to be a huge reveal that would of made it more SAMTIME. There would probably be more SAMTIME bits. I’m also planning to possibly make The Sam Creature into a SCP, to keep The Sam Creature more alive.
P.S. Thanks for the message
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